My eyes are dreary,
was the movie too gory?
no...
but still my body aches,
lonliness perplexing,
every inch,
of my inner being.
My eyes are dreary,
Is something wrong with me?
How am I supposed to know?
Those crazy set
Of eyes,
That once mesmerised me,
Are now blinded
against me!
My eyes are dreary,
Gosh,I feel creepy!
Am I a creep now?
Why dont i cry?
Like everyone else,
When they are hit
In the middle,
Before being deserted!
Pronlonged dreariness
Is seizing me,
let me sleep now.
She wont be coming back,
and my eyes are dreary....
-Subho(17.7.09)
Friday, July 17, 2009
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whose crazy set of eyes mesmerised u?????
ReplyDeleteLike I said that subtle and innocent 'darkness' in ur work is what amazes me :) Keep that pen burnin'...
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ReplyDeletethanku bhai!!appreciate it really!!\m/
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;) its SHYMBOLLI K!!!
Always knew you were good bro...nowadays you're getting better. :)
ReplyDeletedis is really beautiful, very well written
ReplyDelete@pallabidi-thanku very very much!!!thanku for ur appreciation and support!!
ReplyDeleteGrand. This is grand and ebullient. Good work Bhai. Darun likechis. Some kind of old world nostalgia and the eyes. perfect...
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